11 March 2010

I have not love, why? [edited]

I have not love, why?
I demand all my rights
not one of them shall be denied

I have not love, why?
I fear to lose my life
I was afraid that I might die

I have not love, why?
I love myself...
more than Jesus...sigh.


"Then Jesus said to His disciples, If anyone would come after me, he must deny himself and take up his cross and follow me." Matthew 16:24

Hopefully it's better.

4 comments:

Ita said...

The next Amy Carmichael or Elisabeth Elliot? :)
All the best with the project! ;)

Janicelees said...

project sounds BIG. the poem only need a little tweaking in the words. message is still the same. haha

the next amy or elliot? wud be honored but only God willing :D.

Anne said...

i like this! be a Christian poet!

Janicelees said...

thanks anne :)